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[Wolkenkratzer]

Moin,

ich hab einen Text geschrieben wegen so einem Typen, der mich hart aufregt in letzter Zeit.
Der Haken dabei ist, ich hab sowas noch nie zuvor gemacht. Bin 29 und höre mein ganzen Leben lang schon Rap.
Aber praktiziert hab ich nie was oder versucht. Habe "versucht" den Text auf ja ein Battle auszulegen.
Was natürlich nie statt finden wird Aber ich wollte euch mal nach eurer Meinung fragen.
Sprich was ihr von dem Aufbau haltet, die "Reime" & wie ich es besser machen kann.
Oder vielleicht auch ob es totaler Geistiger Abfall ist^^

aHHa jA 041 Ost Deutschland #DICKSEN#
Du Hampelmann schau dich an, rennst rum wie ein schwuler Messdiener.
Zugezogen & voll drauf ja der Spasti hat Fasching, verrät uns sein METHKIEFER!!!
Mit deiner Y0l0 Frisur, Skinny Jeans & der fake Gucci Eastpak..haha
Verpassen dir süße Gay´s gern einen feuchten Tea Bag!!
KEK!
Das traust du dir einfach so?? Schiebst jetzt mies mit uns Welle??
hAA! krass du Bieber!!.. redest vor mir echt von hart & 23std. Zelle???
Von bös Hustln & leute abziehen??
Dich Mädchen!! Nennt selbst deine eigene Mama Carolin!
SPAST!!
Nimmst du dich Toy, selbst eigentlich ERNST??
Oder bist du krass Schwul & machst das weil du für uns Schwärmst??
Was denkst du eigentlich wer du Hur***so*n bist??
Hier ist der, der dich & dein „Fake Gucci Leben“ frisst!!!
Man wärst du froh, wenn du geradeaus laufen kannst.
Machst du dein Mowl auf riecht es echt miiiiess nach Schwanz!!

Labberst von DU willst mich Boxen, doch 10 min später ruft dein Stiefbruder an.
Er ist hart am Motzen & will Zeitnah heute noch bei mir mal Klopfen
Uh habe ich Angst vor deinem, krassen Kennek Stiefbruda
Ein ridiculer, schwuler & benutzter von Babypuder.
Ihr könnt direkt alle beide bei mir Klopfen, doch wenn die Tür auf geht werde ich auf eure Würde Rotzen!
Für dich besitze ich absolut kein Mitleid, …nein ich freue mich schon auf diesen „Fight“
HAHAHA…
Habe ich das wirklich „FIGHT“ genannt??
Naiia zumindest für dich PIDERAS, wird es mies riskant!!
Na komm los du Missgefick, provozier mich weitaaa!
Bis du Lauch bemerkst meine Arme sind, nicht nur eine Handlänge breitaaaa! ... aHHH!! 041

Mein Haftschaden lernt dir schon, der Elite Respekt zu Zollen!!
Du Peach wenn wir mit dir fertig sind, ist dein ganzer Körper geschwollen!!!
Nur 1 Hook Kick in deine hässliche Milchbubi fresse
& am nächsten Morgen bin ich Thema Nr. 1 in der Presse!

Kleiner 18 Jähriger Lauch boy..
Machst krass auf Rambo aber bist nur ein verjunkter Toy!
Man dickaa deine arme Mutter bittet jeden Tag Gott:

„Hab erbarmen & mach ihn Männlicher“

Doch auch dein Dad erzählt allen, du wärst nicht sein Leiblicher!!
SPAST!!!! - Was denkst du eigentlich wer du bist?
Ein KEK der gern, saftige warme Scheiße frisst???
Ein KEK der gern Sterben will?
Hey komm schon kleiner Junge, besser Chill!!
Hast dein ganzes Leben doch noch vor dir.
Doch wenn du drauf bestehst, beende ich es noch vor Vier.
Kapitulier & Entschuldige dich mit gebührenden Respekt.
Dann sehe ich über deine „Jugendsünde“ ein einziges mal hinweg.
Doch beim nächsten mal, fliegt dir aber dann direkt.
Eine Kugel in dein 187 Strassenlutscher Fressbrett!
Eigentlich wirkten wir nie Harmlos, deswegen versteh ich dich echt nicht!! WAS machst du Welle so Scharmlos??


Denke besser 10 x nach, bevor du sie öffnest, deine große Klappe!!
Denn unserer AK´s sind nicht nur Attrappe.
47er Importiert aus Russland, nur beste Qualität!
Den Dulli vom Zoll bestochen, am Röntgengerät.
Ein paar bunte Scheine & bisschen Radikalität.
Das ist alles was man brauch & was unser Staat´s System
Versteht.
Ich möchte echt nicht so derb prallen, doch wir sind skrupellos & lassen sonst Menschen für Dummheit mit dem Leben bezahlen.
Ein letztes mal, sei ab jetzt einfach Still & akzeptiere diesen kleinen Drill.
Lass es dir einfach eine Lehre sein & kehre Heim.

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