"Freestyle" Versuch ^^

[Wanna Ice]

Wanna will´s "zeigen",
Ihr könnt eure Köpfe "neigen",
Ich bin nicht der Bozz ich bin der "King",
Man hast du nicht mitgespietl bei The "Ring" ?
Homes scheiss drauf ist "egal",
Du stellst meine Platten ins "Regal",
Das ist "Drogen" "Rap",
Die "Drogen" die du "Rapst",
Gibt es garnicht ( "Löwenzahn" )
Du geierst wie die "Möwen",
Ihr dreht euch wie ein "karusel",
Komm gib er den "Fusel",


*hust* :tired:

[ghoil]

nich so nä^^

[Wanna Ice]

nur einer ? Das ist so schlecht da könne mindestens 2 posts kommen

Kritik ist oft besser für anfänger also haut raus

[Eyez]

hah okee .
also ..

Wanna will´s "zeigen",
Ihr könnt eure Köpfe "neigen",
ahm erste line für den einstieg nich so gut
(kommt nich gut rüber was du zeigen willst ne)
zweite..ähm meinst du das ernst ?
formulierung ist unpassend
ch bin nicht der Bozz ich bin der "King",
Man hast du nicht mitgespietl bei The "Ring" ?
najaa ist ganz okee & zweite wieder schlecht
formuliert ne
Homes scheiss drauf ist "egal",
Du stellst meine Platten ins "Regal",[/i)
hat keinen wirklichen sinn auch kein representing

den rest kann man sich sparen wiederholt sich ..
les dir einfach mal gute texte durch & versuch deine
Formulierungen zu verbessern...

[TraiZ]

naja halt ein versuch.. ist langweilig, total standart, das kann ich dir im halbschlaf hinfreestylen.. tut mir leid aber das ist echt schwach...

[bcp]

wanna wills zeigen, wie rentner erinnerungsfotos

sowas hät kommen müssen mehr vergleiche und arbeite an deinen reimen alles standarts

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